Problem
Answer the following questions about sample essay 1:
1. What were your thoughts on the introduction and thesis statement? What could be improved about it? What was good about it?
2. Did the topic sentences clearly prove the thesis?
3. Did the author use good analysis after their quotes? Where? What was good about it?
4. Did the author use excellent quality research?
5. What did you like least about the essay? Be specific.
6. What did you learn from this essay that will help you in your draft next week?
Answer the following questions about sample essay 2:
1. What were your thoughts on the introduction and thesis statement? What could be improved about it? What was good about it?
2. Did the topic sentences clearly prove the thesis?
3. Did the author use good analysis after their quotes? Where? What was good about it?
4. Did the author use excellent quality research?
5. What did you like least about the essay? Be specific.
6. What did you learn from this essay that will help you in your draft next week?