Problem
Revision is an important part of the writing process. Once you have a draft of your essay, you can then begin editing and revising. When you revise, you might add more details, remove unnecessary words, or fix the run-on sentences. These are just a few examples of how you can revise your work.
Task
Some people really love revision. Other people prefer just to hand in what is required of them without revising or changing any of the problems. Consider the following questions about revision:
a) What is your opinion on revision and how often do you revise your work?
b) What are the dangers of not revising your work?