Problem
Post a critique of this memo. The following questions should guide your critique, but you would do well to supplement them with your own.
1) Does it convey the information effectively?
2) Is it written in a format that clearly conveys the message in a simple, brief manner?
3) To conclude, assume you are to write a shorter "Memo to the File" on this particular memo from the point of view of the original drafter.
4) How would you document the action taken and the important information if someone needed to retrieve this in the future? Include this short memo in your post.