Assignment task: Can you help me make my introduction and first body paragraph flow better? I am doing an analysis of a music video called Mic Drop by BTS.
Introduction: For my artifact analysis, I will be discussing the three types of tactics that were being depicted along with the lyrics in the music video called "Mic Drop" by BTS. The impact of this music video spread over to millions of fans across the globe with their meaningful, but yet truthful message. The song itself performed a terrific job on capturing the audience's attention with the energetic rhythm and has become fans' favorite due its visual effects and the choreography. Mic Drop serves as a potent reminder to have confidence in oneself and take chances. The lyrics, visuals, and overall themes of the video all emphasize this message of self-confidence and empowerment. Moreover, taking chances and standing up for oneself can be fun and motivating. Thus, I will be analyzing the lyrics, visuals, and the overall themes based on the music video.
First Body Paragraph: The song's lyrics emphasize maintaining self-assurance, being proud of oneself, and having the courage to take chances and be brave. The lyrics also points out about overcoming obstacles (anti-supporters) and staying focused and determined by them singing along the line of "I do it, I do it, you're a bad ratatouille." The use of the word "ratatouille" instead of any other foul language caught my attention, demonstrating the originality and careful consideration that went into the lyrics. Generally, the term "rat" conjures up negative ideas with filth, illness, liars, etc., which can describe anti-supporters as a whole. The title itself, "Mic Drop", is a metaphor for making a statement and leaving an impression. This is further emphasized by lyrics such as "Did you see my bag", and "My success is already so golden". These lyrics emphasize the idea of taking risks and being proud of yourself regardless of the outcome. Furthermore, the lyrics are a powerful depiction of the truth of how individuals regard one another since, despite what we fans may believe, not all celebrities always express support for one another. BTS is a prime example of this because of the challenges they encountered along the way, including people's skepticism. The fact that BTS made this song "it's a fact" rather than a lie showed their worth.