This is a persuasive paper. I am writing the topic about whether consumers should continue shopping at fast fashion retailers while fast fashion is destroying our planet at the same time. There are three arguments for my paper: water pollution, air pollution, and disposal waste. Then, I have a counter argument focusing on H&M's green collection and recycle week, then I write rebuttal and recommendation to conclude the paper. I uses datas and paraphrases from Fashion reporters.
I have concerns with the flow of essay, the strength of my argument and also the following questions.
- error that affect the flow of paper
- is my writing persuasive? is the paper clearly convey my position?
- can I use fashion website and news website for references?
- my writing ethos
- are my visuals helping my arguments?