I submitted the introduction and this is feedback I got back. Can you help me fix this?
You will research and find an example of a firm that is going through transformational change. The first part of the plan will be the Introduction. Context for the introduction includes the following:
o How were the stakeholders affected?
o What initiated the change?
o How well has it been received or accepted, and why?Task Requirements:
Luis, you did not choose a company and you did not answer all of the questions. 15/25Demonstration & application of knowledge:
What you wrote was well written but also very general. Your opening paragraph was essentially a copy and paste of the assignment which does not provide me any details on your chosen organization. This is a large part of this assignment and needs to be included moving forward. 40/55Academic Writing & Format: The title page used is not what I listed, please make sure to use this moving forward. 15/20Score:Proficient: 90 - 100%Effective: 80 - 89%Developing: 60 - 79%Unsatisfactory: 0 - 59%