I'm reading a research essay on The Retail Industry, but don't feel my theis statement is enough. Need a little help in making sure I'm on the right path. discuss how you arrived at that one sentence.
What process of thought led to that sentence? Did you conduct research on your topic before coming up with your thesis statement?
Have you taken a stand in your thesis statement? Do you think that when you do more research on your topic, your stand might change?
Did you start with one thesis and evolve into another