Read attached paper and answer questions below:
1. What is the strongest trait or part of this draft? Why?
2. Do you think the author supports his/her views with adequate evidence? Why or why not? If not, what other support could the writer provide?
3. Where do you feel you would like more details or explanation? Where do you need less?
4. Do you think the author balances the strengths and weaknesses of logical, ethical, and emotional appeals? Why or why not? What could be improved? Is there any evidence that should be included or deleted?
5. Does the author include opposing opinions and rebuttals - where? What could be improved?
6. Give the writer one suggestion about one change that you think would improve the draft (and it needs to be about more than just grammar).
Attachment:- Paper.rar