Please need help with a thesis statement:
Paper Guidelines:
In your comparative analysis, address all of the worldview questions in detail for Christianity and your selected faith.
Refer to chapter 2 of the Called to Care for the list of questions. Be sure to address the implications of these beliefs for health care.
In addition answer the following questions that address the practical and healthcare implications based on the research:
1. What are critical common components to all religions/beliefs in regards to healing, such as prayer, meditation, belief, etc.? Explain.
2. What is important to patients of the faiths when cared for by health care providers whose spiritual beliefs differ from their own?
I currently have this in my paper for introduction:-
In the area of health care, religious traditions can be a very equivocal subject. The reason why is because patients and families may not be able to comprehend how to incorporate their religious beliefs into humanized health care.
Therefore, health care administration can enlighten the patients, and members of their family, on how the practice of their religion may be feasible to their hospital stay. These enlightening obligations may include personal needs, social interaction with hospital staff, and treatment recommendations. Religion is identified by many beliefs and plays a part in the healing of patients. Healthcare providers should not be judgmental of any patient's choice of religion;
we must be educated in cultural sensitivity. Whatever beliefs our patients have they are still deserving of excellent patient care during their hospital stay. Christianity and Buddhism will be in comparison to one another based on worldviews of healthcare.
I understand what you are trying to say, but that is not what is being said. You need to revise this sentence so that it is clear and a solid thesis statement.
The last line is what my professor says they do not understand...and need a clear thesis. Help please.