Journal-
• In this unit, we have focused on revising and editing; understanding expectations; gaining perspective on your writing; ways to outline your paper; the importance of keeping the reader in mind; and how you can best read, process, and respond to feedback. Part of the revision process is sharing with others about what you have experienced. You never know what might help others in their process. Further, sometimes it can help you to better understand and reflect upon your process when you have the opportunity to write it down.
For this unit's discussion, consider the process you have gone through as you revised your paper so far-the introduction and literature review. What have you found to be most helpful for you? What would you share with others about your process? What techniques, tips, and methods have you used to help the process go more smoothly for you? You can also describe methods that were not as helpful to you and what you would like to do in the future that you think might be better.
Keep in mind that the spirit of this writing is to think about ways that you and others might improve your writing process.
Your response should be at least 200 words and should follow APA format. No references or citations are necessary.
Assignment-
Revision of Literature Review and Introduction
Follow the directions below for the completion of the introduction and literature review revision assignment for Unit V. If you have questions, please email your professor for assistance.
Purpose: The purpose of this assignment is to revise the introduction and literature review of your academic argumentative research paper, which you created a draft of in Unit IV.
English Composition II
Description: In this assignment, you will revise the introduction and literature review that you wrote for the Unit IV assignment. Revisions must be substantive and should be made in accordance with the professor's instructions.
The following parts of the assignment must be revised:
• Introduction (9-12 well-developed sentences/approximately 350 words): For more details about what is expected for each of the following sentences, please see "Lesson 4: The Introduction." You may also want to review the "Example Introduction and Literature Review (with comments)." The following components must be included in the introduction (in the following order).
o Sentence 1: Introduce the general topic
o Sentence 2: Pro side (general)
o Sentence 3: Con side (general)
o Sentence 4: Narrow the scope (1)
o Sentence 5: Examples of the narrowed topic
o Sentence 6: Narrow the scope (2)
o Sentence 7: Specific controversy
o Sentence 8: Pro side (specific)
o Sentence 9: Con side (specific)
o Sentence 10:
The thesis
• Literature Review (800-900 words): For details about the structure of the literature review, you will want to review "Lesson 3: The Literature Review: The Process." You may also want to review the "Example Introduction and Literature Review (with comments)." The link is below.
o Literature review preface: This paragraph acts as a guide to what the reader can expect in the literature review.
o Literature review body: This section includes three to four body paragraphs that discuss the history, terminology, and both sides of the controversy (pro and con).
o Literature review conclusion: The conclusion signals that the literature review is ending, but it also acts as a kind of preface for the body of the paper by restating the thesis statement and establishing your argument once again.
• Demonstrate the avoidance of plagiarism through proper use of APA citations and references for all paraphrased and quoted material.
• Implement techniques of editing and revising.
You may also seek out the guidance of the Success Center; the specialists are always there to assist you with your writing and comprehension.
Information about accessing the grading rubric for this assignment is provided below.
Questions-
• What is the difference between a powered industrial truck designated D and one designated DY? Include the citation for the OSHA standard where you found the answer to the question.
2. What is the correct procedure for deflating a tire equipped with a multi-rim wheel? Include the citation for the OSHA standard where you found the answer to the question.
3. What extinguishing agents are prohibited by the Occupational Safety & Health Administration (OSHA) for use in workplace fire extinguishers? Include the citation for the OSHA standard where you found the answer to the question.
4. When an employer provides portable fire extinguishers for use by employees in the workplace, what education or training must be provided to the employees? Include the citation for the OSHA standard where you found the answer to the question.
5. List three conditions that, if found in a wire rope sling, would require the sling to be removed from service immediately. Include the citation for the OSHA standard where you found the answer to the question.
6. OSHA's powered industrial truck standard (1910.178) is consistently part of OSHA's annual list of top 10 standards violated. Discuss some reasons why this is the case. Provide examples that illustrate your point.
7. Your company is planning to build a new storage and distribution warehouse for furniture products. Forklifts will be required to move material around the warehouse and to load and unload trailers. The purchasing department asked you if they should buy internal combustion engines or electric-powered forklifts. Based on the OSHA standard, discuss the considerations that need to be part of the decision, and provide your recommendation on the type of forklift that should be purchased.