Discussion Post
After reviewing attached file with two paragraphs A and B select one :
• Which paragraph is better in terms of unity, support, and coherence?
• What elements of your chosen paragraph show unity?
• What elements of your chosen paragraph show support?
• What elements of your chosen paragraph show coherence?
• Which elements would you remove? Why?
• In what ways can you add to the coherence?
Parameters:
• Choose either paragraph A or B to revise
• Then, copy and paste the paragraph you have chosen
• Show the parts of the paragraph you would consider removing (by making the font red)
• Add supporting elements that would demonstrate coherence within the paragraph (make the font a different color)
• Rewrite your final revision of the paragraph in the discussion board, making sure it has support, unity, and coherence
• Make a plan (outline) that would support that paragraph
• Finally, answer the questions that were asked above the paragraphs concerning unity, support, and coherence
The response must include a reference list. Using Times New Roman 12 pnt font, double-space, one-inch margins, and APA style of writing and citations.
Attachment:- Paragraphs.rar