Problem
What do you make of some of the less believable moments in the story? In particular, what about the ending of the story? Does it seem natural? Does it seem like a logical conclusion for these characters, or does it seem like the characters would never really act the way they are depicted in the end as if the ending is just "tacked on" by the author without a sense of narrative consistency? Are there other less than believable moments in the story, and do they "ruin" the story for you?