Problem
a. What did you learn and how did your essay change? How can you apply what you have learned to other writing projects in the future?
b. Identify one specific change or idea that came from analyzing your essay for transition use, and reflect on how you can use this editing strategy in your future writing projects.
c. Give at least one concrete example of a substantial change you made in this revision to achieve a more effective tone of voice. Be specific. Explain how your awareness of tone will affect your approach in future writing projects.
d. Write at least one paragraph (5-7 sentences) detailing the final changes you made to your essay. Were they big or small, and why did you notice them right at the end of the process?