Problem
This essay should be about the issue and your stance on it, not the essays themselves. You are writing an academic paper on the issue to further your knowledge and the reader's knowledge. You must assert your perspective and the reasons for your stance. Choose your topic and write your introduction with the problem and your solution in your thesis. Put the thesis in bold. Develop the points you make in this essay with examples from the essays you are using as your sources.
At the end of the essay, on a separate page, describe your revision process.
What did you do in your revision that made your thesis stronger?
Did you use additional examples to develop your points in the body of the essay? List them.
List at two additional specific points made in the peer review. What did you do to address those issues in your revision?