Thanks for your postings thus far. For your week 2 essay, it's important that you describe your topic well and have the correct five-paragraph organization. Plus, you need to have appeals to senses in the form of similes. Read Wilkinson's essay for details. For your second post, respond to the following questions: What details does he use that stand out? Does he include any appeal to the senses, and if so, where? If this article were expanded, what ideas or details should the writer share? Why would including more details be important? Respond in 8-10 sentences.