Introductory Paragraph:
Hook: What are the consequence of owning, buying, selling and trading a firearm in America?
Additional lead-in Information:Should the President and Congress control the rights of citizens to bear fire arms?
Thesis Sentence:Guns shouldbe control from those who pursue to harm others and assessable to those who are qualified to protect our country.
Support for Thesis 1
Topic Sentence: On January 2016 President Barack Obama restricted the right of Americans to possess, purchase and trade firearms. The president used his executive authority to enact gun laws that Congress would not pass (Wolverton II, J. 2016).
Detail A: Due to the mass shooting in the Unites States President Barack Obama's restriction of the right of Americans topossess, purchase and trade firearms.
Detail B: Actions by congressional leaders, may not decreasethe number of mass shootings.
Detail C:Should the federal government infringe in any way on the God-given right of the people to defend themselves by use of arms.
Transitional Sentence: The restriction of gun controlled was placed on hopes of controlling those who have access to guns and use them as a terrorist threat to the citizens of the United States. A gun reform would be in place making it harder to own, but this is limited to those who want to purchase fire arms (Wolverton II, J. 2016).
Support for Thesis 2
Topic Sentence: The Second Amendment does not have any boundaries allowing possession to felons and the mentally ill fall outside the scope of the Second Amendment.
Detail A: Problems that these rules impose on the keeping and bearing of arms are at times significant, but they are also incidental expensive, which increase hard inquiriesabout the boundaries between constitutional law, regulation, and legally enforceable private ordering(Blocher, J., & Miller, D. H.2016).
Detail B: The Second Amendment applies to civil suits of trespassing, negligence, and nuisance.
Detail C: The Second Amendment covers gun-neutral laws of general applicability like assault and disturbing the peace.
Transitional Sentence:Terrorist attacks are not just from radical groups afar but also racial, and gender motive attacks in America. Guns can be obtainable legally and illegal to those that are felons and mentally ill. Monitoring the selling of fire arms allowing a waiting period can filter those that are not competent to carry fire arms in America (Blocher, J., & Miller, D. H.2016).
Support for Thesis 3
Topic Sentence: The aftermath of tragedy has stricken our churches, schools and government facilities.
Detail A: Additional gun control techniques in the United States have encountered with a decay of citizens in the awake of mass shooting
Detail B: A 2013 legislative bill to mandate background checks for all gun purchases failed in the U.S. Congress
Detail C: A 2012 school shooting in Newtown, Connecticut is examined, along with U.S. federal firearms legislation and American state law restrictions on assault-weapons.
Transitional Sentence:Will there be a resolution to control guns in America and will the government ever have the ability to seize guns from those that have the right to carry fire arms. How is that the gun manufacturing companies are not accountable for those who use their products(Sanburn, J., Frizell, S., Alter, C., & Sifferlin, A. 2015)?
Conclusion
Because of the massive shooting in America weapons should further be controlled beginning with the individuals who seek afterharm of others.
Summarize main points:There is an executive order to protect American citizens against those that use guns to cause harm and grievance. But is that order to keep guns out of the wrong hands enough. Should the Second Amendment set boundaries to those that are felons and have mental illness. By what method should the citizens protect themselves against terrorist attacks in churches, schools and government facilities.
Final remarks: The issue cannot be ignored and must have a resolution. Many innocent people lose their lives daily to senseless individuals with mental illness, that view in their mind they are right.