TOPIC: Treating animals humanely is important to me because we should treat them the way we treat ourselves, Animals have feelings, they feel pain when people kill them they should know that they feel pain too, and they provide us with security and being a human friendly.
I. Introduction
1. What kind of opening sentence might create interest?
I. Body
1. My first reason: we should treat them the way we treat ourselves { one or two observations or experiences that support this reason.)
My second reason: Animals have feelings, they feel pain when people kill them they should know that they feel pain too.{ one or two observations or experiences that support this reason.)
My third reason: they provide us with security and being a human friendly. (One or two observations or experiences that support this reason.)
I. Conclusion
1. Restate your thesis using different language.