I need help creating a solid thesis statement for the following topic: Active military service can be very different from civilian life. Some veterans have a smooth transition to civilian life at the end of their service while others do not. There are many variables that may influence a veteran's experience.
Research Question: What can be done to increase the likelihood of a smooth transition from military service to civilian life?
I attached 4 papers that have different topics in their body/paragraghs and would like to align a thesis to match these papers. I had previously tried to organize a thesis (Listed below). I just cant seem to organize a 1-2 sentenses thesis that would support a final paper (1500 wrds+).
Examples that need help to match the attached Papers:
"Smooth transition from military to civilian life is one of the top challenges facing veterans today. It can be hard for service members because they are trained on a skill set that require other qualifications than what the military provides. Others have health concerns integrating with people because of PTSD. While others are successful because of information, resources, counseling before transitioning"
"Transitioning to civilian life or finding civilian employment is one of the top challenges facing veterans today. "
"Smooth transition from military to civilian life is more difficult for service members who experienced traumatic events during their service because they are more likely to suffer from Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, do not commonly recognize the effects of their own condition, and do not receive personalized support planning."
"Some veterans argue that transitioning into a career is hard because they are trained on a skillset that require other qualifications than what the military provides. Others have health concerns integrating with people because of PTSD. While others are successful because of information, resources, counseling before transitioning."