The human resources department is happy to announce a


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"The Human Resources department is happy to announce a career development workshop led by Alex Alden. He has 20 years of experience in career development training and will help you gain a clearer understanding of your career goals he will also discuss tools to work toward your career goals. The workshop will take place November 10 and 11, and it will start at 9:30 a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m., and there will be coffee and tea in the morning lunch will be provided in the afternoon. Respond to this e-mail to sign up because only 40 spaces are available."

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a. Reduce sentence lengths.

b. Correct comma splices.

c. Correct run-on sentences.

d. Use only compound-complex sentences.

e. Correct fragments.

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