Write a sentence or two about each of the following thesis statements. If they are weak, explain why. If they are good, explain why as well.
I believe that we need to educate ourselves better about genetically modified foods.
Some genetically modified foods are harmful; others are not.
Like it or not, our food is genetically modified, so we’d better just live with it.
This paper presents the results of my study of electronic surveillance in the workplace.
The changes in the Liberty University dress code have had overwhelmingly positive effects: students are more comfortable in class, parents find it more affordable to clothe their children for college, and Liberty University students appear more friendly and accessible when they enter the Lynchburg community.