Assignment:
• Suggest an improvement to the organization
• State whether your classmate's purpose is clear. If it is not clear, explain what is confusing.
• State whether the introductory paragraph gets your attention and whether the purpose is clearly conveyed in the introductory paragraph.
Response posts must be 125 to 200 words in length
Refer to the Ashford Writing Center's Citation and Reference Guide for guidelines on citing sources in APA style.
Attachment:- Thesis statement with plan of development.rar