Q-Rewrite the the following santances to remove inapproriate use of passive voice:-
-Most of the information you need will be gathered as you document the history of the journals
-Come to the reception desk when you arrive.A packet with your name on it can picked up there
Q-Revise the following santance to remove the redundancies
-In grateful appreciation of your patronage,we are pleased to offer you this free gift as small token gesture of our gratitude.
-An anticipated major breakthrough in storage technology will allow us to proceed ahead in the continuing of our gratitude.
Q-Revise the following santances by replacing the vague elemnts with specific infromation,make up any reasonable details,
-The results won't be available for a while
The chemical spill in the lab caused extensive damage.