Assignment: Revising Sentences for Positivity, You-Attitude, & Style
Your Task. Revise the following statements to follow the principles of "you-view" and goodwill.
1. Without filling out the appropriate requisition form, the disciplinary action report indicated that Kelly purchased two fax machines for the department.
2. They spent the month visiting our satellite offices and meeting their staff. In Fort Wayne. In Lawrence. In Flint. And in Dayton.
3. Employees who were just hired and are therefore defined as novice employees by the company should take steps to ensure that they attend a mandatory training session that is required of all novice employees.
4. It is extremely doubtful that the sales figures will see an improvement before the end of the quarter.
5. The report that was completed by the Finance Department organizes essential information in a quite unsatisfactory manner.
6. Few of our customers who are most valued seek to obtain goods and services form another vendor; but we must remain ever vigilant in the business environment to better ensure that these such customers continue in their loyal efforts with our establishment.
7. Hey, don't get too excited about the interim promotion since you won't be in the job past August.
8. I just can't believe how much your work has improved in the past few months.
9. The server is down. I'm guessing it won't be available again until a few more hours, so be patient.
10. I doubt there will be any problems scheduling one of our service technicians to look at your furnace on Wednesday. Just don't plan on leaving your home between 1 p.m. - 5 p.m.
Format your assignment according to the following formatting requirements:
1. The answer should be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides.
2. The response also include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student's name, the course title, and the date. The cover page is not included in the required page length.
3. Also Include a reference page. The Citations and references should follow APA format. The reference page is not included in the required page length.