Question:
Please review the following sentences and then reword them so that each conveys the same message as the original but in a more effective way.
The pizza was terrible.
Public speaking can be exciting.
The heterogeneous nature of this year's entering freshman class is an onerous burden for those seeking to market goods and services to them.
It was found that there was a mouse, which was the cause of the nighttime noises.
The female victim was really brutally killed and murdered.
Some of the numerous reasons for the automobile crash were that there were a multitude of problems such as driver error and hazardous road conditions.
The man was gardening in the heat of the day. The warm temperatures in the garden were extremely hot. The man collapsed in the garden. The man was a victim of heat stroke.
Once again, Mark McGuire had hit the baseball into the stands.
Mel Gibson walked into the restaurant, talking to the fans that gathered around him.
Every man in this organization is important to the success of our company.