Revise each of the sentences and correct each sentence. There may be more than one way to correctly write each; expectation is that you provide one possibility. Additionally, some sentences may be correct as they are. For each sentence, preserve the meaning and make it error free.
If we upgraded our software, we will prepare reports more quickly.
The guidelines will explain who is eligible for the benefits, costs, and how to apply.
We have increased our advertising thus we hope to sell more of our product.
The report was signed by the controller the internal auditor and the vice president.
Neither Susan nor Lisa are on the committee.
This is the employee's parking lot.
Either the computers or the printer is malfunctioning.
The benefits of this health insurance policy is obvious to employees.
We review the client's system of internal control. Then we will recommend ways to improve it.
Three new procedures were used to improve the internal control system. This was the responsibility of Hugh Tran.