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Although Canada and U.S. are neighboring countries, the banks of United State and Canada differ in many aspects. There is one difference which I considered significant is bank regulation.
First of all, Bank regulation differences between the banks in Canada and United States refer to amount of involvement the countries gov't have in monitoring the activity in their financial market. In Canada, Canadian banks are primarily controlled by the federal gov't via the Bank Act. US banks have a dual-system, where some banks are state-monitored, while others are monitored by federal gov't.
Also, U.S. and Canada have a fundamental contrast in policy aims and regulatory philosophy. Therefore, US banking policy tend to encourage borrowers, while Canadian regulation is inclined to make sure lenders are intact. As result of this regulation difference, Canadian regulators have tended to be more assertive. US federal community reinvestment act forces banks to lend in low-income areas, which causes American banking regulation is more intrusive than the Canadian system.
Finally, the industry structure is different which means number of banks are different in two countries' regulations. CANADA: only 6 major banks - 90% of country's total bank assets. U.S.: many small banks
In conclusion, the US and Canada banking system is different since their different bank regulation system.