can you make correction for this letter for me
"Dear :
The purpose of this letter is to briefly introduce myself as MedSupply Corp's new Sales Representative, for linen division. I very recently join the sales team, the company has already doing business in DME, Tube Feeding and O&P and now marketing their linen products and am now keen to meet face-to-face to introduce the products. Accordingly, as a first step in my customer familiarization process, I would like to meet with you personally, so, to discuss your buying experience with the competitor and a list of the items concerns. At the same time I would also like to take that opportunity to briefly review our latest offering of products and services. To set up a meeting for this at your convenience, I propose to call your office by the end of this week. It is my hope that we will be able to arrange to meet at your offices before the end of the month.
As your new Sales Representative I believe that my paramount concern is how both MedSupply and I can better serve your needs and wants. I will look forward to meeting with you and learning more about your company in the near future."