I need a descriptive essay. I want it to be about Disney world or Busch Garden in the USA.
Pls you must have visited either of these above mentioned places.
Paragraph 1: Introduction Paragraph
Topic sentence/"hook" for your opener (This should NOT be a question.)
Some basic information about the place you will describe. Omit your juicy and awesome descriptions for the body paragraphs. In the middle of this paragraph you can say where this place is. You might say when you were there or some other broad statements like that.
"Blueprint" Thesis Statement--The last sentence of this paragraph is the main point for your whole essay, followed by at least three reasons.
For your first essay, your thesis can restate what the place is. Follow it up with three reasons why it's important. The reasons are the "blueprint."
I love to be ________, and it is important to me because #1______________, #2____________, and #3_____________: adjust this as needed. You may want to restate your main point in your own way, which is fine. Just make sure you use three "because" statements/fill in the blanks. If you don't remember how that might work, revisit the week 2 module and view the AMAZING and WONDERFUL example that I wrote for you as a model.
Topic Sentence ---Reason #1
Explanation or description or analysis (For the first essay it should be description.)
Concluding sentence (Transition to next paragraph is good here.)
Paragraph Three
Topic Sentence ---Reason #2
Explanation or description or analysis (For the first essay it should be description.)
Concluding sentence (Transition to next paragraph is good here.)
Paragraph Four
Topic Sentence ---Reason #3
Explanation or description or analysis (For the first essay it should be description.)
Concluding sentence (Transition to next paragraph is good here.)
Paragraph Five: Conclusion
Reminder/restatement of the thesis
Summarize Main Points (from body paragraphs)
Concluding sentence: Final statement should finish off the essay with a strong statement.