Your introduction needs a story/example and the thesis statement.
You need 3 body paragraphs with a clear topic and some examples. The topic for each body paragraph should be one of the supporting ideas from the thesis.
The body paragraphs should be long-- aim for 7 sentences each.
You need a conclusion that restates the ideas in the thesis in different words.
This will be similar to the essay you write for the assessment: try to plan, write, and edit the essay in 40 minutes.
Most employees have access to the internet at work. Some people maintain that this allows them to manage their personal lives, such as banking and shopping, without taking time off work. Employers, however, find productivity is dropping because paid time is spent surfing the web for matters unrelated to the company. Should internet use be restricted at work? Support your position with detailed examples.