Keep in mind as you read the following: as soon as you have read it and thought about it, we should meet to talk about your plans for revising.I think you have almost everything you need here for an excellent capstone project, but it needs more structure. That's what I have talked about below. Only after the structure is revised will I also work on some places where the English is awkward or the quotations don't exactly fit....
My biggest concern is the connection (or lack thereof) between the part of the paper that talks about scholars and the part that talks about anti-Muslim polemicists with no real claim to scholarly credentials. These two things seem very different to me. So the first thing I want to know is, What do you think connects them? How would you explain that connection to someone who is just beginning to study negative stereotypes of Muslims?
Attachment:- capstone_12-16.rar