Please include the yellow faculty box as a part of the Assignment Cover sheet.
It was a pleasure speaking with you on the telephone. As I stated during the call, it is clear that you read and researched the assigned case; however, this paper does not comply with APA formatting guidelines in the body of the paper and on the reference list. Here are my comments to help you write an even stronger paper:
Formatting/Citations
• Whenever you provide information that is not in common knowledge insert a citation. The citation allows the reader the opportunity to refer to the reference list and retrieve the document.
• Citations also add validity to the paper. Even though the focus of this assignment was on an assigned case, you must include citations.
• Please do not include a list of citations in the body of the paper. You provided a list of cases but did not indicate to which portion of the paper it applies. Did you actually read these cases? If so, please insert the citation for the cases in the section of the paper to which it relates.
- For every citation on the reference list, there must be a corresponding citation in the body of the paper.
Content
• It is important to point out the reason the corporation wanted to remove the case from state court to federal court. There is a presumption of immunity under the FSIA for foreign states.
• Please see the following article, Tiering and the Foreign Sovereign Immunities Acts after Dole, written by the New York Bar Association on the topic of this case: https://www.nycbar.org/pdf/report/1_CQH01.pdf The article provides important insights into this case which should be helpful.
• The farm workers at Dole initiated this law suit because of alleged injury from chemicals. What responsibility does the company have? What responsibility do the workers have?
• Please include a conclusion paragraph which summarizes the content of the paper.