Devising a new thesis, or focus statement that is perhaps more creative or simply more well-defined; - Revising the body paragraphs of your paper to more overtly connect them to the thesis statement;
1) Adding new supporting arguments that incorporate new rhetorical strategies (description, narration, compare/contrast, definition)
2) Revising paragraphs that contain more than one supporting argument (see this week's recommended reading on paragraph development)
3) Constructing a new conclusion
4) Length: Approximately 1500 words