In what way do you "re-vision" or "re-see" the paper as you rewrite it? What do you look for in the introduction? What should the body of the essay be doing? What is the purpose of the conclusion? How is revision different from editing? Give examples from the revision you will do for this week's assignment.
Does this revision process differ from the one you use? What is the most important revision process you see in this posting? How might this change your revision strategy?
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