Problem 1: Identify 3 things (3 different types of errors, i.e., not all 3 can be spelling errors) that are wrong with this cover letter and explain how they could be improved.
Problem 2: Assume parts that are not shown at the top and bottom, such as address, date, letterhead, are included in the letter. You are analyzing the components provided below.
Application for full-time Feature Writer with Sports Magazine (publishing company).
Dear Jane Smiley:
Greetings. I have seen a lot of openings in your organization and i have been keen to work with the organization with a paced environment like City Life Magazine. I don't have any experience related to journalism background. I am a fast learner both system and administrative side with key skills. I am attaching herewith my resume for your consideration to identify my skill and qualifications. Hope my qualifications and experiences suits your requirements.
Waiting for a positive reply.
Lily Gregory