I need to work on a Toulmin essay of 1,000 words on illegal immigration and can't get a strong tesis statement and can't put it together with the introduction. I just nee help put it in together and help making the thesis statement strong.
Introduction: Throughout the history, the United State has been the paradise for immigrants for the economic opportunities that America offers. Although some immigrants enter in accordance with the law some decide to enter illegally costing the taxpayers billions of dollars.
Thesis: The impact of illegal immigrants to the economy and security of the United States of America.