Discussion:
The main point about the essay ( How parents do to raise children to be responsible adults? ),( Not all parents know how to raise children ).
Introdaction:
Thesis: In order to raise responsible adults, parents must be both strict and flexible at the same time.
Paraghraph (2) why it's important (It is easy to bring them to the life, but can we make them responsible, successful, and give them happy life).
Paraghraph(3) Synthesis of sources, Discuss sources
Paraghraph (4) Discuss develop problem (discuss bad parenting -for examples crime), (child rearing, theway parents raise their children greatly impacts their social skills)
Note:not all crime can be blamed on parents.
Paraghraph (5) Develop solutions
- Advice
- How Protect children
- Prepare them to function as citizens of the world
- Interact socially
- Internet
- Education for parents
Conclusion:
If all parents would take the time to educate themselves, they could prepare their children to fanction responsibily as adults. Infact How pleasant the would be if.......... ( keep as it is and just complete last sentence)
Write each paraghraph in brif , In paraghraph (3) rest 4 sources in write brifly if they agrry or not and their view