Problem: An essay should have three distinct parts, almost equally divided in terms of length. The first part should state your self-concept: how you identify yourself in terms of gender, ethnicity, religious preference or anything else you consider important for identifying yourself and your background. The second part should describe the area or areas of knowledge you find interesting, and you would probably build vour professional career related to that area or areas. You need to state your detailed plans. And the third part should explain how vou want to be successful in life and beneficial for other human beings vide the EWU's mission of achieving excelience and providing service, In this part, you. should focus on the quality of your life, both material well-being and psychological well-being.: The lemonade was very sour, it needed more sugar. O comma splice O fused sentence no error