Discussion Post: Emphasizing Important Information in a Technical Description
Study Dr. Juneja's email. For each of the five points he makes, identify a passage in the original draft that could be improved as he describes. Revise each of the five passages according to his suggestions. For example, the first point in his email refers to the title of the draft. Revise the title to reflect his suggestion.
Reflection
Once you've completed your discussion, write a reflection about your work using the prompt below.
Return to one of the sources you consulted as you further researched 3D printing. Examine how effectively this source emphasizes important information. Explain the ways in which this source follows or strays from the principles of emphasis and coherence covered in the chapter. In presenting information about 3D printing, did any of your sources inspire ideas about how you might improve the organization and development of your own draft? How so?
The response should include a reference list. Double-space, using Times New Roman 12 pnt font, one-inch margins, and APA style of writing and citations.