After completed the first draft, the professor left some comment. The essay is finished, Revise/improve base on professor's advice.
Below is the prompt for the paper:
For the final paper do an analysis or compare/contrast on The Metamorphosis by applying a physical or mental illness to Gregor:
How does Gregor remind you of how broken and/or sick people are treated in society, such as: AIDS patients/old people/cancer patients/drug addicts/homeless/that strange boy in grade school who eats crayons. How does his family, the manager and the three roomers treat him as such?
Again, choose your own malady and apply it to Gregor. In your research use medical and/or psychology journals to help define Gregor's diagnosis.
The professor said I did not stick on my mental illness enough, need more explanation to make it convincible. But I tried my best to relate the mental illness with Gregor already.
Improve the paper. Basically, use the mental illness I chose to explain Gregor actually did not transform, it is the result of mental illness caused by stress. Clearly, I did not relate the malady with Gregor enough.
Given the paper is : "The Metamorphosis Analysis".
Attachment:- The Metamorphosis Analysis.rar