1. What is the writer's overall argument, or thesis? Indicate your answer here. Be sure to put this in your own words, even if you think you might be misstating the argument.
2. If needed, how could the writer improve the thesis?
3. Does the writer provide evidence to support the thesis? Is the evidence sufficient? Provide ideas for how the writer could strengthen the evidence.
4. Is the paper effectively organized? Is the paper focused, or does it get off track? Identify any places where the organization is problematic and/or the paper goes off-topic.
5. Are the points adequately developed and explained? What would you like to hear more about? Less about? Explain.
6. What is the strongest element of this draft? Explain.
7. What should the writer focus on the most in revision? Where might the paper go? What more might be included? Write your advice here:
1)What is the meaning and relevance of virtue in society? How is the good life related to virtue? What is the difference between pleasure and happiness?
2)Using the list of Aristotle's Virtues, explain the perennial value of virtue to human well-being and how it differs from the pursuit of pleasure.