How could the thesis statement be clearer


Problem

Below is the list of features from the peer review worksheet that I and your peers will be looking for in your paper. Evaluate your paper beforehand to ensure you've effectively included all required elements.

• Summary: Does the first sentence (or two) contain the author's full name, article title, source, and a paraphrase of the author's main point or thesis statement? Identify what is missing.

• Circle any places where the writer's opinion is present. (There should be none.)

• Thesis: Is there a clear thesis that states the writer's WTG and ATG evaluation of the article? (Hint: Does it use although or however?)

• How could the thesis statement be clearer?

• Criteria: How does the writer make clear his/her criteria for a successful essay?

• Support: Does the writer support the thesis with clear evidence?

• How could the writer develop WTG and ATG evidence more effectively?

• Conclusion: Does the conclusion bring together the summary and the review?

• Clarity: Circle on the draft any confusing or unclear or confusing sentences.

The response must include a reference list. Using Times New Roman 12 pnt font, double-space, one-inch margins, and APA style of writing and citations.

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