Discussion:
Revise the following sentences to eliminate wordiness.
1. There are many consumers who are drawn to a product because the advertising campaign has been effectively utilized.
2. Advertising is one of several communications forces which portrays its role when it moves consumers through successive levels. These levels include unawareness, awareness, comprehension, conviction, and action.
3. Advertising is one of the most attention-grabbing methods of selling a product. This is in addition to the fact that it is also a medium of information. It's these two elements combined together that define what advertising is in its essence.
4. When defining the purpose of advertising some experts who analyze ads admit that it is a manipulation of the public while others insist that advertising promotes the general well-being of its audience.
5. Like I mentioned before, it is not only women who are being portrayed sexually. Men are portrayed in a sexual way in advertisements also.
6. There are many qualities which an advertisement must have to be persuasive to the public to buy its product. In many respects, the advertisement must be noticeable, informative, and eye-catching. With these qualities in the ads, they will be the first ones to sell.
7. Due to the fact that there exists a built-in sexual overtone in almost every commercial and advertisement around, it is possible to uphold that it is not only women who are being portrayed sexually but their male counterparts as well.