Nowadays people are used to communicate and interact online resulting in less communication occur in real life.
b) For instance, most of us prefer to communicate with our family and friends through technology by chatting, text messaging or video calls rather than to meet up with them.
c) We enjoy connected with others in the virtual world more than in the real world.
d) Making new friends will also help us to be successful in the future as they may become our business partners.
e) Besides not having deep relationships with others, a lot of us might become parasocial which means develop one-sided relationships with the media being devoured. Social media will affect our social skills too.
f) Good communication skills is important as getting along well with people will increase the quality of our life and is essential for careers, specifically for business.
g) Solitude also not only can help us to improve concentration but also give us introspection, wisdom and conduct.
h) We do not want to create robots and efficiency monsters who does everything under one click, or soon our world will become electronic society.
i) Hence, we should think deeply and think wisely before offering our future leaders technology, or we will regret making wrong decisions.
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