Problem
You suggested that "most of the causes of the wars were unrelated," but this didnt seem to come through in your post. For example, you discussed the new ideologies prompted World War II, but that they stemmed from the issued leading up to and cuased by World War I. Hitler came to power, for example, becuase of his speedched about defending Germany and getting it back into its proper place after World War I. What "unrelated" cuases led to World War II?