Do you think any of your provisional answers might be your working thesis statement? Which one might be a good thesis? Please post your first attempt at a thesis statement. You want a concise statement that clearly indicates your position.
You want to make sure that your thesis statement is persuasive and logical.
- Avoid informative thesis statements such as this: Many health organizations claim that smoking is bad for one's health, and this has led to warning labels and advertising limitations.
- Also avoid illogical thesis statements. This one uses the "slippery slope" fallacy: Smoking should not be banned in public places. If this happens, the government will ban overeating and drinking in public next.
- An effective persuasive thesis typically includes a claim and why. For example: Exposure to cigarette smoke poses serious health risks, particularly to children and those with breathing problems. Therefore, smoking should be banned in all public places to protect the most vulnerable.