Im creating an essay to compare or contrast your life in the real world with your life in an imagined "perfect world." One of my paragraphs is about technology, and I need help on structuring this paragraph. My teacher wants the body paragraphs to have one part of the paragraph about the ideal world and the other half about the real world. I also really need help on adding a lot more words to this paragraph because mines is very short.
(My paragraph about technology):
Due to increase in technology from machinery to industrial revolution and in near future from industrial revolution to artificial intelligence and robotics revolution will make human life easier. First, robots will help people in many ways during day to day life. Furthermore, robot will prepare food for people, but some people believe that the taste would be different. In addition to this, if some member in family die, with the help of robotic technology they can proper human being same as that. There will no longer be use of gasoline engines because of the advancements that comprises resources and new means of production that will help make our planets future a healthy one.
One last thing, is that I wrote a conclusion paragraph for this essay, and I need help revising this paragraph.
Utopia is "heaven on Earth", a perfect imagined place. Due to the fact that our Earth is nowhere near perfect, it's almost like a short getaway from everything. Everyone wants to be able to live an amazing life. A life without pain or having to worry about living paycheck to paycheck. A life where no one is abused. A life that is perfect. Everyone has their own utopia, their own "perfect world". The place that they can escape to when they are stressed, or just need to get away. Every once in a while, we all need to get away, to a faraway land where no one can reach us, if we want to be left alone.