Problem:
Rewrite the paragraph made up of simple sentences using coordination and subordination. Combine sentences where you think it would help improve the meaning and style.
The wind is strong. The waves are choppy. They are growing larger. I paddle my kayak harder. My arms are getting tired. The energy is draining from them. They grow limp and heavy. The other side of the harbor seems distant. The glow of the setting sun is behind me. It spreads orange and purple fingers across the sky. My kayak finally glides past the rocks to the sheltered beach beyond. I am exhilarated and exhausted.