Assignment:
DB: Finding Examples in Need of Revision
Now, it is your chance to do a little research. On the Internet, find a poorly edited/written piece and post it for the rest of the class. Remember, the piece needs to be academically appropriate. What about the piece makes you think it is poorly edited or in need of revision?
Next, discuss your own revision process. What was it like revising your Argument Essay last week? What is one area within your writing that you think may need extra attention with revision? Why?
In response to your classmates, what did you think of the written piece that your classmates shared from an online source that needs to be revised? Consider the issue that your classmates mentioned needing to be revised within their own work: what advice for them do you have?