Paper Problem
Reading over your memory draft, it may make more sense to start with a narrower focus. Discussing all of child development is very broad, however, your focus is on social judgment and aggressive behavior. Think about why this narrow topic is important and what you can do to make it more clear in your introduction.
The Introduction is vey broad you should funnel-shaped introduction. It should leads you step by step down to the very narrow point of your essay (the thesis). The first sentence of the introduction should get the reader's attention. you can mention why the study is important?
The response must include a reference list. Using Times New Roman 12 pnt font, double-space, one-inch margins, and APA style of writing and citations.