Problem
A. Story or anecdote (in this case, about Jaymie).
B. Nut graph (or 2). You read about this in the text. This is the part of the article that screams (this is what this story is about).
C. Develop the issue, weaving in more examples like Jaymie, quotes from outside experts, and those involved/connected to the issue.
D. Note how the story also ends with Jaymie. This is called a "tie back." It is a good technique. It is not always necessary to end with the person you wrote about at the beginning, but you should revisit that person at some point. The best ending is usually a quote that reflects on the major issue in the story. If that quote happens to come from the person you started with, even better.